[TOS] writing style for textbook
gdk at redhat.com
Tue Mar 16 13:05:52 UTC 2010
On Tue, 16 Mar 2010, Karsten Wade wrote:
> On Sun, Mar 14, 2010 at 11:14:53AM -0700, Karsten Wade wrote:
>> What is our writing style for the textbook going to be?
> In response, Greg Dek said:
> "Somewhere between semi-informal textbook tone and informal how-to
> Reading the chapters and thinking about voice consistent, I think that
> means we can feel OK with using the second-person pronoun "you", be
> sparing but don't sound stilted. Third person references are for
> other existing entities, such as upstream projects. For consistency,
> we can remove any first-person references.
I agree with this. It sounds right in the little voice in my head.
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